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新东方4 6级考试作文免费辅导课程 讲义 第三课

第一节

Should Firecrackers Be Banned?

1. 有人认为放鞭炮是好事,为什么?

2. 有人认为放鞭炮是坏事,为什么?

3. 我的看法

2. 造成:cause、lead to、result in sth.、bring about、be

responsible for

First,setting off firecrackers leads to fires.Secondly it result in injuress to people.Finally it also brings about noise.

On the other hand, there are many people who say that firecrackers should be banned.

They point out that firecrackers are responsible for fires which destroy property, and for injuries suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders. They also say that firecrackers are a waste of money and resources.

注:point out 指出;be responsible for 造成

On the other hand,there are many people who say that pets should be banned.They point

out that pets are responsible for nioses which disturb people's rest,and for injuries suffered both by the people who keep them by innocent neighbors.

My own point of view is that we should preserve the old custom of letting off

firecrackers, while at the same time making them harmless. We can do this by banning firecrackers from public places. In addition, we should restrict the setting off of firecrackers to festival days.

注:My own point of view is that we should be allowed to keep pets, while at the same time making them harmless.

1998年6月

For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:



Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?

1.有些人认为某些数字会带来好运。

2.我认为数字和运气无关……

注:Some people believe that some number can bring them good luck.

For example in China the number eight is believed to be a number that can bring people good luck.Another example is the number six.

第二节

1998年6月

For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?

1.有些人认为某些数字会带来好运。

2.我认为数字和运气无关……

注:Some people believe that some number can bring them good luck.

For example in China the number eight is believed to be a number that can bring people good luck.Another example is the number six.

There are people who believe that some numbers bring good luck, while others bring bad

luck. For instance, in China the number eight is thought to be lucky. Turning our attention to the West, we find that the number seven is considered lucky, but the number 13 is avoided like the plague.

注:认为:is thought、is considered

In spite of all these claims, most people would agree that there is little evidence that numbers

have any influence on our lives. In fact, they say, the reverse seems to be the case. ……In fact, they say, the reverse seems to be the case. For one thing, we might expect calculators to break down every time they note the number 13, and for another, although every week has seven days we know that not every week is lucky for us.

Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter point of

view. It is obvious that there is no scientific basis for the belief that there is a connection between luck and numbers. All in all, it seems to me to be superstition.

注:latter -> former;superstition 迷信;All in all, it seems to me to be a waste of time.

第三节

As a general rule, people like to help others, but there are occasions when you should say no

to requests for favors. For instance, it is better to refuse when a child pesters you for sweet food and drinks or for too many toys. Another example is when a relative asks you to use your influence to get him or her a bank loan or a work promotion.

注:pesters sb. for 缠着某人要……

However, we cannot ignore the fact that many people are reluctant to say no. They feel that if

they turn down a request from a relative or friend, they will cause ill-feeling within the family or become unpopular with their acquaintances. A notable case in point is when the boss asks them to do something which they feel is unreasonable.

注:2004年1月 “Reduce waste on campus”

we cannot ignore the fact that many students are wasting food.

……Not throw them away, they revised the perservation date, and saled them again after several

days. Another case in the point, a pair of shoes was made from goat. However, in order to sale at a

high price, the salers would say they were made from cow which has good quality.

1998年1月

For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Fake Commodities. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1.假冒伪劣商品的危害 2.怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品



注:把问题说清楚分成三步:

1、提出问题 2、分析问题 3、解决问题

Like most people, I welcomed the advent of the market economy. Nevertheless, it must be

admitted that, along with the benefits of the market economy, have come problems. In my opinion, the biggest problem is the large number of fake and shoddy goods, which are found all over the country and do great harm to society



第四节

1998年1月

For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Fake Commodities. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1.假冒伪劣商品的危害 2.怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品



注:把问题说清楚分成三步:

1、提出问题 2、分析问题 3、解决问题

Like most people, I welcomed the advent of the market economy. Nevertheless, it must be

admitted that, along with the benefits of the market economy, have come problems. In my opinion, the biggest problem is the large number of fake and shoddy goods, which are found all over the country and do great harm to society

注:The existence fake commodities a complex problem, with which this society is confronted.

杰出:outstanding;急迫:urgent; nevertheless 然而 = however

It must be admitted that, along with the benefits of the internet, have come problems.

Fake and shoddy goods are harmful on two levels. Some people think that the quickest

way to make profits is by selling poor-quality commodities, and this undermines the nation's economy; at the same time, some fake and shoddy goods are bad for people's health. This makes consumers distrust the sellers, and the free market in general.

注:Fake commodities do harm to consumers' health.

I drank a bottle of water so I had a bad stomachache, so I went to see the doctor.

level:层面 (on);aspects:方面 (in)

In view of the seriousness of this problem, it is essential that laws and regulations be

worked out to ban the manufacture and circulation of fake and shoddy goods. At the same time, consumers should be educated to identify sub-standard commodities. With proper laws and an alert public, it will only be a matter of time before fake and shoddy goods become things of the past.

注:打击犯罪:crack down on;规定:regulation;制定:work out ;鉴别:identify

警觉的:alert;before -> for;become -> to become;“population explotion”

Population explotion is a complex problem with which…

分析问题、分析原因

失去控制:out of control

解决办法

In view of the seriousness of this problem, it is essential that laws and regulations be

worked out to control the birth rate.

At the same time, the people should be educated to one child policy/family planing.

At the same time, the people should be educated to carry out one child policy.

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第一节

必须改正的语法错误:

1.词性 success n succeed v

2.单复数:电脑很有用 Computers are very useful

3.冠词

4.时态:作文基本上以现在时为主。

5.代词一致

例:

If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone. To a company, no consumer will buy your product again.

Nowadays, there are many dishonest performance in our society. ...... Another case in the point, a pair of shoes was made from goat. However, in order to sale at a high price, the salers would say they were made from cow which has good quality.

②Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams.

Dishonest people are short-sighted.

注:virtue 美德;customer 顾客

①In our modern social life, there are many examples around us show many people are cheated. Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even one's closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: where is our honest exist?

高分作文:

用词准确、句式多样,

推荐句式有,被动句 : It is widely believed that...

呻吟句:I you we;compare come to the conclusion

A comparison of the two graphs leads us to the conclusion that

非人称主语句、复合句、并列句

复合句中共有六种从句:主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、定语从句、状语从句、同位语从句: ,+which 非限制性定语从句

1) Motor vehicles discharge large amounts of exhaust fumes. They seriously pollute the air in the city.

Motor vehicles 机动车;discharge 排放;exhaust fumes 尾气

They→,which

注:computers are very cheap. Almost every family can buy one.;so that

computers are so cheap that almost every family can buy one.



第二节

作文中注意:

1、不要用口语词 (You konw. wanna. gonna. hay ……)

2、不要用生僻词

搭配共分为四种:

第一种:形容词+名词(大幅度的增长 — a sharp increase )

第二种:动词+名词 (犯罪 — commit a crime )

(达到目的 —achieve a goal)

第三种:动词+副词(大幅度地增长 — increase sharply)

(大幅度地增长 — increase dramaticly)

第四种:动词+介词(或+小副词 up down out off)

( break out/down/into/through)

例:

We often can meet with soming happened cause by people who are not honest. For example, Now we take the bus need carry cents own, and when you upstairs the bus, you should put the cent into the money box.

注:soming 改成 something;happened cause 改成 caused;cent 改成 changes / coins

when we take the bus, we need carry coins own,



When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some

other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.

注:人们的 观点 不一致:

people's opinion differ.

When it comes to reading, people's opinion differ.

第三节

全真试题—Unit 1



Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as

many as bad books.

注:由于是限制型定语从句,两个逗号应该去掉。

认为:think,believe,argue,claim,hold

But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of

books can only give us one aspect of knowledge.

注:but 改成 however;the 应该去掉;who从句前后逗号应该去掉

To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible.

By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.

注:To my point 改成 in my opinion 或者 in my view;By 改成 In

就我而言,我认为:as far as i am consider

Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published.

注:more and more 改为 an increasing number of

第四节

1995年6月

Directions:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the title: Should Firecrackers Be Banned? You should base your composition on the following outline (given in Chinese).

Should Firecrackers Be Banned?

1. 有人认为放鞭炮是好事,为什么?

2. 有人认为放鞭炮是坏事,为什么?

3. 我的看法

注:传统:tradition、custom

1. Some people think that setting off firecrackers is a good thing.

Some people think that setting off firecrackers is beneficial. First it can add to atmosphere on festivals. Second it is a Chinese tradition.

Some people think that setting off firecrackers is a good thing. They say that it is an ancient Chinese custom which should be preserved. They also claim that firecrackers make festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children.

注:When it comes to setting off firecrackers,people's opinion differ.

简单句的扩展:拉长主谓宾,加上定状补。

First,pets can reduce our loneliness.

In the first place,pets such as dogs,cats,birds can reduce loneliness for both adults and children.

2. 造成:cause、lead to、result in sth.、bring about、be

responsible for

First,setting off firecrackers leads to fires.Secondly it result in injuress to people.Finally it also brings about noise.

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新东方4 6级考试作文免费辅导课程 讲义 第一课

写作的三条原则:

1. practice 从现在开始到考试,规定至少写十篇作文;

2. input

3. vary:作文要强调的不是内容,而是语言。

注:practice n. 实行, 实践, 练习;input n. 输入,投入

逃税 cheat on tax flee tax(错误的表达);vary 变化

例:

从图表中我们可以看出:在过去十年中,大学生花在电脑上的小时数是不断增加的。

In the past ten years, the number of hours a college student spent on the computer has been increasing.

上升,增长 ascend

It may affect his study if he spends too much time on the computer.

eyesight 视力; It may do harm to one's eyes.

对出题人的分析:

1.出题的内容

(1)关于大学生的话题;

How are Finance My College Education?;Reading Selectively or Extensively?

campus life 校园生活

(2)常见的社会问题。

The Changes in People's Diet;The Changes in the Ownership of Houses

Traffic Jams;Traffic accidentes;Motorcycles;private cars 私人小汽车

考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识,不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。

How to Develop the World Economy?;非典 SARS

第二节

对出题人的分析:

1.出题的内容

(1)关于大学生的话题;

How are Finance My College Education?;Reading Selectively or Extensively?

campus life 校园生活

(2)常见的社会问题。

The Changes in People's Diet;The Changes in the Ownership of Houses

Traffic Jams;Traffic accidentes;Motorcycles;private cars 私人小汽车

考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识,不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。

How to Develop the World Economy?;非典 SARS

2.出题的形式

六级考试作文的出题方式有:命题作文,看图画或图表作文,根据所给文章(英文或中文)写出文章摘要或大意,给出关键词作文等。

根据所给文章(英文或中文)写出文章摘要或大意,考的可能性很小。

给出关键词作文,只要你的作文中包含所给的词语就可以了。

car pollution;Nowdays cars cause serious pollution to the air.

So I prefer to go to school by bike.



(一)正反阐释题,比例35%;

(二)阐释原因、方法,描述危害题;

(三)永恒话题;Haste Makes Waste

(四)图表题;

(五)书信题。

3.要求:字数150,时间30分钟

试卷二上,改错和作文,应该集中精力先保证作文。

5 + 20 + 5

5 审题和构思,审题要求看懂题目,大约1、2分钟即可,构思就是简单的勾勒一下自己可能写到的内容。

20 写正文

5 改错,不要整句都改,改一些细小的地方,比如说,单复数,时态等。

第三节

对出题人的分析:

1.出题的内容

(1)关于大学生的话题;

How are Finance My College Education?;Reading Selectively or Extensively?

campus life 校园生活

(2)常见的社会问题。

The Changes in People's Diet;The Changes in the Ownership of Houses

Traffic Jams;Traffic accidentes;Motorcycles;private cars 私人小汽车

考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识,不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。

How to Develop the World Economy?;非典 SARS

2.出题的形式

六级考试作文的出题方式有:命题作文,看图画或图表作文,根据所给文章(英文或中文)写出文章摘要或大意,给出关键词作文等。

根据所给文章(英文或中文)写出文章摘要或大意,考的可能性很小。

给出关键词作文,只要你的作文中包含所给的词语就可以了。

car pollution;Nowdays cars cause serious pollution to the air.

So I prefer to go to school by bike.

(一)正反阐释题,比例35%;

(二)阐释原因、方法,描述危害题;

(三)永恒话题;Haste Makes Waste

(四)图表题;

(五)书信题。

3.要求:字数150,时间30分钟

试卷二上,改错和作文,应该集中精力先保证作文。

5 + 20 + 5

5 审题和构思,审题要求看懂题目,大约1、2分钟即可,构思就是简单的勾勒一下自己可能写到的内容。

20 写正文

5 改错,不要整句都改,改一些细小的地方,比如说,单复数,时态等。

对改卷人的分析:

1.字体

字迹清楚、段落明朗 : 先总后分 连词用上;写完检查 然后欣赏

关联词

In the first place, first of all, to begin with,

in the second place, furthermore, moreover, for one thing, for another, what's more, what's worse;finally;last but not least;Will spring be far behind if winter has come?

一般要求3段

只写一段者:0~4分;只写两段者:0~9分(指规定三段的作文)

② I think reading not only selectively but also extensively. Because the two sides are not contradict......

5分

注意文章各段的开头

graph:

从上面的图表中 from the above graph= from the graph above= from above the graph

为什么很多大学生喜欢读小说?

Why so many college students like reading novels?= Why do so many college students like reading novels?

语义上要高度概括

实例一

2003年1月Range-finders

It Pays to Be Honest

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1.当今社会上存在着很多不诚实的现象。

2.诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实。

第四节

实例一

2003年1月Range-finders

It Pays to Be Honest

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1.当今社会上存在着很多不诚实的现象。

2.诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实。



注:It Pays to Be Honest 诚实是有回报的

show→showing;show→that show/which show;product→products

honest→honesty;teach sb. to do sth.;honest→to be honest;economic→economy



①In our modern social life, there are many examples around us show many people are cheated. Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even one's closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: where is our honest exist? ......

Everybody is taught honest in the primary school or even in the kindergarten. Honesty does good not only to ourselves, but to others as well.

②Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams.

③With the development of modern economic and industry, competitive is becoming more and more obvious. At the same time, the performance of dishonest is becoming more and more clearly.

注:economic→economy;industry→society;competitive→competition

obvious→fierce;increasingly;performance→phenomena

action behavior dishonest people

必须改正的语法错误:

1.词性 success n succeed v

2.单复数:电脑很有用 Computers are very useful

3.冠词

4.时态:作文基本上以现在时为主。

5.代词一致

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使用计算机必懂的53个英文单词和缩写

使用计算机必懂的53个英文单词和缩写
PC:个人计算机Personal Computer
·CPU:中央处理器Central
Processing Unit
·CPU Fan:中央处理器的“散热器”(Fan)
·MB:主机板MotherBoard
·RAM:内存Random Access Memory,以PC-代号划分规格,如PC-133,PC-1066,PC-2700
·HDD:硬盘Hard Disk Drive
·FDD:软盘Floopy Disk Drive
·CD-ROM:光驱Compact
Disk Read Only Memory
·DVD-ROM:DVD光驱Digital Versatile Disk Read Only Memory
·CD-RW:刻录机Compact Disk ReWriter
·VGA:显示卡(显示卡正式用语应为Display Card)
·AUD:声卡(声卡正式用语应为Sound Card)
·LAN:网卡(网卡正式用语应为Network Card)
·MODM:数据卡或调制解调器Modem
·HUB:集线器
·WebCam:网络摄影机
·Capture:影音采集卡
·Case:机箱
·Power:电源
·Moniter:屏幕,CRT为显像管屏幕,LCD为液晶屏幕
·USB:通用串行总线Universal Serial Bus,用来连接外围装置
·IEEE1394:新的高速序列总线规格Institute
of Electrical and Electronic Engineers
·Mouse:鼠标,常见接口规格为PS/2与USB
·KB:键盘,常见接口规格为PS/2与USB
·Speaker:喇叭
·Printer:打印机
·Scanner:扫描仪

·UPS:不断电系统
·IDE:指IDE接口规格Integrated Device
Electronics,IDE接口装置泛指采用IDE接口的各种设备
·SCSI:指SCSI接口规格Small Computer System
Interface,SCSI接口装置泛指采用SCSI接口的各种设备
·GHz:(中央处理器运算速度达)Gega赫兹/每秒
·FSB:指“前端总线(Front Side Bus)”频率,以MHz为单位
·ATA:指硬盘传输速率AT
Attachment,ATA-133表示传输速率为133MB/sec
·AGP:显示总线Accelerated Graphics
Port,以2X,4X,8X表示传输频宽模式
·PCI:外围装置连接端口Peripheral Component Interconnect
·ATX:指目前电源供应器的规格,也指主机板标准大小尺寸
·BIOS:硬件(输入/输出)基本设置程序Basic Input Output
System
·CMOS:储存BIOS基本设置数据的记忆芯片Complementary Metal-Oxide Semiconductor
·POST:开机检测Power On Self Test
·OS:操作系统Operating System
·Windows:窗口操作系统,图形接口
·DOS:早期文字指令接口的操作系统
·fdisk:“规划硬盘扇区”-DOS指令之一
·format:“硬盘扇区格式化”-DOS指令之一
·setup.exe:“执行安装程序”-DOS指令之一
·Socket:插槽,如CPU插槽种类有SocketA,Socket478等等
·Pin:针脚,如ATA133硬盘排线是80Pin,如PC2700内存模块是168Pin
·Jumper:跳线(短路端子)
·bit:位(0与1这两种电路状态), 计算机数据最基本的单位
·Byte:字节,等于8
bit(八个位的组合,共有256种电路状态),计算机一个文字以8 bit来表示
·KB:等于1024 Byte
·MB:等于1024 KB
·GB:等于1024 MB

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Yet 的用法

一、副词 yet 作“还”,“仍然”讲

1. Much yet remains to be done.

    尚有许多事情待做。

2. Yet molecules are always moving, some perhaps as fast as a mile per second.

    分子仍然总在运动,其中有些分子的运动速度达每秒一英里。

3. The experiment is not yet over.

    这项试验尚未结束。

4. No one has yet seen an electron.

    还没人见过电子。

5. Man has not yet learned to store the sun's heat.

    人类尚未学会贮藏太阳热。

 

    二、副词 yet 和比较级连用,作“还要”,“更”讲,常可用 even 代替

1. This is a yet ( 或 even) more difficult task.

    这是一项更为艰巨的任务。

2. We must study yet ( 或 even) harder.

    我们必须更加努力学习。   

 

    三、副词 yet 用于现在完成时作“已经”讲,只用于否定句和疑问句中

1. Have you seen such a space shuttle yet?

    你(已)见过这样的航天飞机吗?

2. Has the bell rung yet?

    铃已打过了吗?

3. The bell has not been repaired yet.

    铃尚未修好。

注:在肯定句中表示“已经”要用 already,不能用 yet。若在疑问句中用 already 代替 yet,则表示惊异的语气。  

eg: Has the bell rung already?  铃真的打过了吗?

 

    四、连词 yet 和 and yet, but yet 用法举例

1. It is very good, yet ( 或 but) it can be better.

    这很好,但还能精益求精。

2. It is strange, and yet it is true. ( =It is strange yet ( 或 but) true.)

    真奇怪,却是真的。

3. Air has weight, and yet it is very light.

    空气有重量,虽然很轻。

4. Although this matter sounds strange, yet it is true.

    此事听起来虽然奇怪,但却是事实。

5. The wheel is the simplest yet ( 或 but) perhaps the most remarkable of all inventions.

    轮子是所有发明中最简单却也许是最非凡的一种。

6. Everyone thinks that this is a simple method, (but) yet he cannot believe it.

    大家都认为只是个简单方法,但他不信。

  

    五、词组 as yet (到目前为止)和 just yet (就在此刻)常用于否定句中

1. They have not made such an advanced computer as yet.

    他们目前尚未制造出这样一种先进的计算机。

2. No one has as yet been able to produce the absolute zero of temperature.

    还没有人能产生绝对零度。

3. It will not happen just yet.

    此事一时尚不至于发生。

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